Log in

Crimson - The White Tower Room [entries|archive|friends|userinfo]
The White Tower Room

[ userinfo | livejournal userinfo ]
[ archive | journal archive ]

Crimson [Dec. 8th, 2003|04:48 pm]
The White Tower Room



O dear o dear o dear, the wedding cake, it's in the middle of the road, and o, so am I, and look, there's roses, all around, but I wanted lilies, and they're running like blood, are they blood, who's bleeding?

...she couldn't see the car, she was carrying too much...

I thought I heard voices, but where are they, they're hiding, and see, one's blue, and lotsa white, and o, look, one's tall, and funny, and has a hat...

...lost too much blood, nothing we can do, sorry...

Is it time, should I get dressed, where're the flowers, where's the ring, where's Adam, and o, the cake, they got it wrong, I thought it was white, but look, it's red, is it red velvet, do they know they got it wrong?

...got here too late, nothing left, she can't feel pain, they called, but we got here too late...

Too much, too late, too much, too late, is that a song, should we dance, where are my shoes, where's my mom, my dad, I need to dance with my dad, where's Adam?

...you should say goodbye, we can't do anything, she'll go soon...

Is that Adam, o, it's Adam, it's you, why are you crying, don't cry, I'm supposed to cry, not you, what's wrong, is something wrong, what are you saying, I can't hear you, talk louder, don't cry, you'll have red eyes, red eyes, red roses, red cake...

...love you, don't go, don't leave me, Morana, Ana, my Ana, hold on...

Hold on to what, where am I going, I'm not going anywhere, you are, you're leaving, what's happening, Adam--


...bye, Morana...

...Bye, Adam.

[User Picture]From: lady_fox
2003-12-11 04:39 am (UTC)
I like the concept. Something seems off.... maybe the ending is a little too abrupt. I can't tell if she realizes what happened at the end or if she's just responding. I think that's it. Otherwise, I really like it. :)
(Reply) (Thread)